Book Review: Coronets and Steel
Dec. 29th, 2010 11:07 amI love Crown Duel with an unholy love and have read an enormous percentage of Sherwood Smith's published work since then, hoping the magic would strike again. But I'm beginning to wonder if I should just give up. I read Coronets and Steel this weekend, and I believe there's a good story in there - but it needed a sympathetic editor with a machete to clear out the underbrush.
But first, some things I liked. The invented country Dobrenica is fascinating. The history! The politics! The genealogy! The Eastern European-ness! Smith has a gift for invoking rich, textured worlds, and I would have happily read pages more. The main character, Kim, is lovely if frustratingly incurious.
This brings us to the first problem with the book: the heroine, our window to the world, neither understands nor tries to understand the machinations of the Dobreni ruling class into which she has been thrust. On the one hand, this makes perfect sense. Kim thinks she's going to go home and never see these people again, so why should she dive into their politicking? But on the other hand, it's damn frustrating to read, because it means that events keep flattening Kim like falling safes.
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But first, some things I liked. The invented country Dobrenica is fascinating. The history! The politics! The genealogy! The Eastern European-ness! Smith has a gift for invoking rich, textured worlds, and I would have happily read pages more. The main character, Kim, is lovely if frustratingly incurious.
This brings us to the first problem with the book: the heroine, our window to the world, neither understands nor tries to understand the machinations of the Dobreni ruling class into which she has been thrust. On the one hand, this makes perfect sense. Kim thinks she's going to go home and never see these people again, so why should she dive into their politicking? But on the other hand, it's damn frustrating to read, because it means that events keep flattening Kim like falling safes.