Date: 2022-04-08 12:27 am (UTC)
skygiants: Rebecca from Fullmetal Alchemist waving and smirking (o hai)
From: [personal profile] skygiants
What about balancing the stakes to keep the final line punchy -- "James can't stand to keep Timothy in danger, but can he bear to lose him?" Or something like that? (Otherwise, the rest of the summary seems very clear to me! EXTREMELY looking forward to it. :D)
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