Agent Carter, season 2, the second half
Mar. 26th, 2020 08:59 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
osprey_archerWe’ve reached the part in season 2 of Agent Carter where the show begins to unravel. The first half of the season is actually pretty solid (which surprised me; I suppose the song-and-dance “which man shall I choose?” number in episode nine colored my memory of the whole season), but things start to go downhill after Peggy gets mildly impaled in episode 5. (Don’t worry, she’s back on her feet in episode 6.)
I’m fairly sure the impalement occurs mostly so there’d be an excuse for an unlikely team-up with Dottie Underwood, and in theory I love this idea - more Dottie! More of Dottie and Peggy forced to work together!!! Of course it’s inherently a rather silly plan, but this is a superhero spy show, I’m willing to revel in silly plans if the characters pull them off with competence and panache.
Unfortunately that’s not the case here. Peggy has no reason to believe that Dottie will cooperate, or indeed do anything at all except run the moment she gets the chance - and she does nothing that might change Dottie’s mind about that. Her approach is all stick, no carrot, even though we’ve seen before that this approach doesn’t work on Dottie (it ended with Jack Thompson pinned to the floor with a table at his throat) - and also that Peggy knows that, because she knows how to handle Dottie, at least as well as anyone does.
Of course, the carrots that Peggy can offer are somewhat limited: given the nature of Dottie’s crimes, Peggy can’t exactly let her go free, for instance. But there are other carrots she could offer. A long personal chat with Peggy is probably high on Dottie’s wishlist, for instance, and the prospect might at least make Dottie delay her inevitable escape.
At very least, Peggy ought to pretend to be friendly, instead of being so clipped and cold. As Whitney Frost notes, Dottie wants to believe that Peggy is her friend; Peggy could win a lot of ground simply by playing into that hope. Yes, still take all possible precautions, but talk to Dottie as if she’s a valued and trusted teammate, and the tracking device that will explode if Dottie tries to escape is an unfortunate bureaucratic necessity. Sure, Dottie will see through it, but she’ll eat it up anyway.
As it is, Peggy gives Dottie no reason to cooperate, so when the plan goes all pear-shaped it feels like a foregone conclusion. What did Peggy expect? She gave Dottie no reason to cooperate, and so Dottie didn’t.
And I think this sort of encapsulates a lot of the problems in the second half of the season: the characters, who hitherto have been so clever and on top of things, suddenly seem like incompetent pinballs tossed around by the levers of an increasingly out of control plot. I think the writers made the villains in the story just a little too powerful (the Arena Club controls everything; Whitney Frost is an unstoppable force of destruction); even by the generous standards of “realistic” one expects in a superhero spy story, it’s hard to see how our heroes could realistically win. So the story loses its thread.
I’m fairly sure the impalement occurs mostly so there’d be an excuse for an unlikely team-up with Dottie Underwood, and in theory I love this idea - more Dottie! More of Dottie and Peggy forced to work together!!! Of course it’s inherently a rather silly plan, but this is a superhero spy show, I’m willing to revel in silly plans if the characters pull them off with competence and panache.
Unfortunately that’s not the case here. Peggy has no reason to believe that Dottie will cooperate, or indeed do anything at all except run the moment she gets the chance - and she does nothing that might change Dottie’s mind about that. Her approach is all stick, no carrot, even though we’ve seen before that this approach doesn’t work on Dottie (it ended with Jack Thompson pinned to the floor with a table at his throat) - and also that Peggy knows that, because she knows how to handle Dottie, at least as well as anyone does.
Of course, the carrots that Peggy can offer are somewhat limited: given the nature of Dottie’s crimes, Peggy can’t exactly let her go free, for instance. But there are other carrots she could offer. A long personal chat with Peggy is probably high on Dottie’s wishlist, for instance, and the prospect might at least make Dottie delay her inevitable escape.
At very least, Peggy ought to pretend to be friendly, instead of being so clipped and cold. As Whitney Frost notes, Dottie wants to believe that Peggy is her friend; Peggy could win a lot of ground simply by playing into that hope. Yes, still take all possible precautions, but talk to Dottie as if she’s a valued and trusted teammate, and the tracking device that will explode if Dottie tries to escape is an unfortunate bureaucratic necessity. Sure, Dottie will see through it, but she’ll eat it up anyway.
As it is, Peggy gives Dottie no reason to cooperate, so when the plan goes all pear-shaped it feels like a foregone conclusion. What did Peggy expect? She gave Dottie no reason to cooperate, and so Dottie didn’t.
And I think this sort of encapsulates a lot of the problems in the second half of the season: the characters, who hitherto have been so clever and on top of things, suddenly seem like incompetent pinballs tossed around by the levers of an increasingly out of control plot. I think the writers made the villains in the story just a little too powerful (the Arena Club controls everything; Whitney Frost is an unstoppable force of destruction); even by the generous standards of “realistic” one expects in a superhero spy story, it’s hard to see how our heroes could realistically win. So the story loses its thread.
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