Wow, I like the implications of there being both a Poseidon and a Neptune. I'm now imagining Hera and Juno arguing about who's the One True Spouse, and Demeter and Ceres alternately encouraging and blasting the harvest.
I'm also super impressed by juvenile-you's sense of humor and pacing. This story is exactly as long as it should be, all beats in place!
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Date: 2023-05-07 04:27 pm (UTC)I'm also super impressed by juvenile-you's sense of humor and pacing. This story is exactly as long as it should be, all beats in place!