I'd love to read it, as I like exactly all of the things you describe as elements in this novel.
I think you probably want feedback from someone better at plot and structure than me, though. My notions of plot are still sort of at "go, have feelings! stare at objects! surely plot will resolve from this!" sort of levels.
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Date: 2016-03-16 12:50 am (UTC)I think you probably want feedback from someone better at plot and structure than me, though. My notions of plot are still sort of at "go, have feelings! stare at objects! surely plot will resolve from this!" sort of levels.