I have a draft of a blurb for Tramps and Vagabonds!
I just realized every time I read the title, it gets the folk song "Tramps and Hawkers" stuck in my head, which is more of a feature than a bug because I have very fond memories of being sung that song at a party something like twenty years ago: and if the weather please me fair, I'm happy every day.
Nothing in this blurb is unclear; it feels as though it could be condensed slightly.
“Which parties in this sexual interaction are actually considered queer?”
Ha! Mazel tov! If twenty-first-century labels break down, then you did it right.
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I just realized every time I read the title, it gets the folk song "Tramps and Hawkers" stuck in my head, which is more of a feature than a bug because I have very fond memories of being sung that song at a party something like twenty years ago: and if the weather please me fair, I'm happy every day.
Nothing in this blurb is unclear; it feels as though it could be condensed slightly.
“Which parties in this sexual interaction are actually considered queer?”
Ha! Mazel tov! If twenty-first-century labels break down, then you did it right.