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osprey_archer ([personal profile] osprey_archer) wrote 2021-01-27 05:55 pm (UTC)

Yeah, that makes sense. I wish there had been just a little more to confirm he lives before the "We're going to see Daddy" line - even something like a sentence or two about someone stanching the bleeding from the bullet wounds would have helped, so you don't have that brief "Are they walking into the snow to die...?" moment.

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