Yes: too much specificity. Or to put it another way, it would be great if what you wanted to play up was how important art was to the two of them, but then you'd be doing the blurb a whole other way ("Art--it had been what brought Olivia and Ashlin together back in junior high. And what had mortally wounded their friendship. Now, in Florence, will sharing thoughts on Michelangelo ("just Bible fanart") coax their friendship back to life?")