I really like what you've got so far, although this: the two budding young artists nonetheless begin to repair their broken bond as they share waffles with Nutella and discuss whether Renaissance art is really just Bible fanart in the end. I would cut to the two budding young artists nonetheless begin to repair their broken bond
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Date: 2019-04-30 12:58 pm (UTC)I really like what you've got so far, although this: the two budding young artists nonetheless begin to repair their broken bond as they share waffles with Nutella and discuss whether Renaissance art is really just Bible fanart in the end. I would cut to the two budding young artists nonetheless begin to repair their broken bond