http://riventhorn.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] riventhorn.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] osprey_archer 2012-09-19 02:56 am (UTC)

This has so many wonderful parts in it, and I love getting more of a look at Nissa as a character. When Esca gently reminds Cottia of what it will mean if she refuses to take Nissa, and how Cottia is guilty and ashamed--that felt so in-character. And then when Nissa goes on and on about all the chores that will face Cottia--doubtless true, but very clever of Nissa to emphasize them! :) And such a sweet ending, with Nissa asking her to call her by a different name. I can see them becoming good friends. Loved it!

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