entwashian (
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2011-02-07 05:46 am (UTC)
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You do not fail at writing Ned!
All good points! Especially the bit about tension in his character. He is naturally so earnest that he's probably afraid he's going to slip up and reveal his secrets at any moment.
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All good points! Especially the bit about tension in his character. He is naturally so earnest that he's probably afraid he's going to slip up and reveal his secrets at any moment.