http://flowing-green.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] flowing-green.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] osprey_archer 2010-12-08 12:36 pm (UTC)

this was beautiful! your writing style is very smooth, I like it. Hungary's and Russia's dialogue was particularly good and I loved how you described Russia, nauseated but desperate for control. good work!
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